martes, 14 de agosto de 2007
My name is Eliezer Salvador Leyva Najera ,my birthday is the 27 September 88, my favorite color is blue and black, I have 18 years, my favorite song is Nothing is Gonna Change My Love For You-Glen Mederos, my favorite movie is Transformers, my favorite show in T.V is “Difficult in believe”, my favorite season is autumn and winter, my favorite hour of the my day is 6:0, my favorite clothing shirt and trousers, the name of my pet is Beker, the people most important in my life is mother and father, my best friend is Edgar Rivera Delgado.
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My observations are that in the date of birthday it needs to put (th) 27th; and when writing the age that we have not puts I have it is I am.
Greetings!!
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My observations are that in the date of birthday it needs to put (th) 27th; and when writing the age that we have not puts I have it is I am.And your favorite hour of the day is 6:00 o clock
My observations are that en the date of britday it needs to put (th) 27 th.
that is everything.
very well.
Some details that you must take into account to improve or not to return to commit he himself mistake serian the way in which you wrote the date of your birthday and the hour; that perhaps was finger mistake.
Eye in the next one!
In this entrance i saw some details that i think are mistakes. One of them is in the date of his birthday, he needs to put the "th" termination to the 27 like this: september 27th. another is when he said that his favorite color is blue and black, he is talking about two colors so he has to talk in plural, in his age he doesn't have to write "i have", he has to write "i am 18 years old".
he also says " the people most important in my life is my mother and my father" , but tha's wrong, it has to be writen like this: the most importat people in my life are my mother and my father" because he is talking about two people.
that's all , i think so. if i'm wrong in something just let me know please.
Hey One of them is in the date of his birthday, he needs to put the "th" termination to the 27 like this: september 27th......
Hey one of the errors:::
in his age he doesn't have to write "i have", he has to write "i am 18 years old".
My observations are that in the date of birthday it to put (th) 27 th.
in his age he doesn't have to write "i have", he has to write "i am 18 years old".
ok bye.
She has grammatical mistakes in the numbers and the surname of her actor this one written evil and " Difficult in relief " is not a show.
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